clever title

i am success. i win. and i want you to like it-
   commend. follow. and repeat.

i am lose. i fail. and i bet it's hard to watch.
   critique. laugh. and forget.

these are both my false realities.
i spend far more time
   washing dishes
   paying bills
   eating pb&j

i am obviously not that great
i am definitely not that bad
i am okay

we are fine- we are good in fact, but of no thanks to ourselves.


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  1. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:45 PM

    When we met in Feb. I would have never pegged you for a poet! I read your stuff, it was really good. This one was my favorite from the front page :)

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    1. Jake MaxwellMay 10, 2012 at 12:48 PM

      thanks travis! enjoy your summer man. hope to catch you around-

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